Today in class my website was critiqued. Here is the feedback I received:
-The contact section is very effective, it shows you everything that you need to see.
-Add a hover element for the social media links. The hovers can match the colors for the rest of the site.
-Give the copyright section at the bottom more breathing room from the social media links, also there is too much space between the kickstarter button and the social media links.
-Good use of shape and color. This makes the webpage relate to the product which is effective.
-The composition is well organized.
-Works? (I wrote this down but I can’t remember the context.)
-The text in the large blue triangle is too close to the edge and creating edge tension.
-The triangle being on top of some elements and behind others is and effective use of the Z-axis.
-Since the product is about photography have more images on the page.
-At the top of the page the triangles are a bit too bright and distract from the logo.
-Add a set footer to the page to signal that it is over.
-The light animation where it turns on and off is a nice effect.
-Another comment about text edge tension with the blue triangle.
-At the top of the page vary the dark triangle sizes a bit.
-Add more line spacing for the paragraph at the top of the page.
-Split the larger images into several smaller ones.
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